Summer Rain

May I wear you in the night like a gossamer gown?

drifting within rising tides of your eyes~

As I lay my head upon the shoulder of a dream

bursting with hope at the seams ~

While we walk together  in the summer rain~

Like barefoot lovers ~ melting upon pavements

Steamy pavements of love.

 

©SyberRose

 

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

oh you have done it yet again Rose.. just so dreamy and gorgeous..

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much dear...I'm glad you like it...Hugss

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when we are together the rain hits the sidewalk as we stroll side by side, and there is steam...not just passion kind, but the steaminess of a very strong bond, strong love.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jacob for peeking in as always...Rose:)

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rose. A lovely write that's romantic and delightfully sensual. Well crafted free verse that is short, concise and succinct. You paint a vivid picture of love on a rainy day. Nice use of simile. Excellent word picture in the last two lines. Well penned. Write on!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Shelley...and thank you again for taking time to comment...Rose:)

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome Rose.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

AWE... such a gentle nature combined with pure romance makes for a euphoric combination.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Dale...and for peeking in today...glad you liked this piece...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

The queen of romance . The feminine version of Jack...Awesome...:)

[SyberRose]

Yes so true haa...thanks again Sami...:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)