Just When

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Just when i think all is gone
a  whisper of you comes along
a thought, sweet and gentle
a smile adorns my face
I  guess my heart loves you
the thought of your embrace

Just when i think all is gone
you enter my mind like a song
maybe just sentimental
my heart starts to race
remembering your hue
my love for you can not erase

Just when i think all is gone
just like egg foo yong
though intercontinental
a blush upon my face
over an ocean of blue
my memory doth trace

Just when i think all is gone
a teardrop slips like a sarong
though the feeling is mental
we entwined, a shoe lace
in love me and you
our memories still interlace

Just when i think all is gone
a bell within sings ding dong
just instrumental
thoughts of you doth grace
a pas de deux
memories arranged in a vase

Just when i think all is gone
you come along...along again

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

very sentimental read for me... not so sure about the egg foo yong, the sarong, and the ding dong ...they all introduce a bit of a less deep mood for me ... the theme is so universal .. how well most of us know that past love that never seems to leave entirely .. and lo and behold ...they suddenly stand before us ...just when we thought we were over with it ;} ... man can i relate!!
E.

[Rose of many colours]

Hi SyberRose how you doin.....

[SyberRose]

Hi there...I am doing great and nice of you to peek in today...:)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Oh this is lovely,it especially relates to my life i love the first lines " Just when i think all is gone
a whisper of you comes along
a thought, sweet and gentle
a smile adorns my face
I guess my heart loves you
the thought of your embrace
Just when i think all is gone
you enter my mind like a song
maybe just sentimental
my heart starts to race
remembering your hue
my love for you can not erase"

[SyberRose]

Thank you Nkosana....i'm glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose

[Nkosana B Masuku]

You welcome

[Rose of many colours]

This is a soft touch .Very feminine,versatile.....

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for visiting...i do appreciate it...:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

another amazing poem, great rhyming scheme flows beautify and was an enjoyfull read

[SyberRose]

Thank you...i'm happy you liked it and for taking time to read....:)

[Ency Bearis]

Such with compassion, lovely verses.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Ency...and thank you for peeking in again this morning....:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Gentle and romantic read. Good poem

[SyberRose]

Thank you Baby...and thanks for peeking in tonight...Rose:)

[Dominique Lambright]

I liked this a lot because you made me really pay attention. I had to look up the last part "a pas de deux" and it was interesting yet romantic and heart felt. It is relatable because sometimes there is one person we can never get rid.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Dominique...and so nice to hear from you today...I appreciate your visit...Rose:)

[Dominique Lambright]

You're welcome. :)

[KurKota]

My first reading of your work. I like the underlying theme of hope. I like the repetitive line, and the rhyming pattern. Very sophisticated styling over all, indicating well developed writing skills, it appears to me.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Kurkota...I appreciate your nice comments...and thank you for taking time to read...Rose

[Nick]

What really captivates me about the poem is your voice. I can tell its you; its effortless. In short, perfect.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Nick...I appreciate your visit tonight...:)