Nightingale

The lavender fog swirls like a Juliet rose

while the lunar liquid trickles down

the window of passion~

 

A dusty pink blossom awakens

to the stem of night

 bathing in her glory~

 

And torturous bewitchment of thirst

delights in the whispers of adoration.

 

Melodious strings of your guitar

descend deeply into a wilderness

exploring in a pool of wonderment~

 

 I am your sweet nightingale

your songbird in our Eden of night

as the timbre of my voice serenades~

 

(Your melodious drug of choice)

 

As whispers flow through your pulsating veins

lifting you above the clouds

to an extraordinary planet~

 

An unknown planetary nebula

where desire is our haven~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

You write with such a delicate hand. Your heart must truly live on your sleeve. Excellent piece, Rose.

[SyberRose]

well i'm glad you like this Travis...if you click on my profile you can hear me recite it on segment six of jtodds podcast...i have the url there...Rose

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

i will be sure to give it a listen!

[Laura]

Wow, this is a fantastically written piece, I really enjoyed it.

This is stunningly romantic and beautifully crafted, and the word choice is perfect. The imagery is superb, dreamy, and surreal.

Great work!!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Laura...i'm so glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Dreamy and romantic. Your images are rich with color and imagination. I enjoyed the read. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you Lydia...and for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Aubrai]

I know nothing about romance, but your work awakens something in me that's vaguely familiar. Am I saying it right? Well, I love the imagery and how the whole scenario was featured. One by one, everything was described and we all ended up imagining a beautiful night, sweet and soft.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Aubrai...so glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[one sky]

This is romantic. The choice of words is amazing. Nice imagery.

Bravo!

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Margaux...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such a stunning poem from beginning to end. Your words stir the inner passion and ease a restless soul.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Dale...so nice of you to say...thanks for peeking in tonight...Rose:)

[SoulSplatter]

Wow! Absolutely amazing! The picture, the font and the perfect words strung together to create this glowing masterpiece! I am awe struck! I loved it! Thank you so much for sharing this piece of genius with us! Very well done!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This is a lovely and romantic piece of work. "The lavender fog"...very descriptive.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sharon for taking time to read and comment...Rose:)

[wunder]

~doesn't love always dwell within some sort of haze-but
with lavender melodies sweetly arranged you seemed to
have found the nightingales call "(Your melodious drug of choice)"~ LoVe!!!
~gorgeous!!!~:)))

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much James...and thank you for peeking in today...Rose:)

[wunder]

~yer so very-very welcome~ :)

[Stella Armour]

"adoration", i love that word, i used it a lot when i first started writing , and this is what your poem is..just adorable..:o)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Stella....glad you enjoyed dear...Rose:)