Whirlpool of Baby Blues

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She can feel the waves of yearning

upon the pinnacle of the crest

as the whirlpool of baby blues

splash softly upon her mind~

 

And whispers of beguiling voice

serenade the serpentine stars~

 

She becomes blinded with insanity

floating aimlessly in mid air

spinning without a parachute

into a net of delectation~

 

While multiple arrhythmic beats

                awaken her

 from a deep and colorless sleep~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Great read and write dearie.. picture of this lady really speak out what is rushing in your mind while writing down this one here :)
- Singh :)

[SyberRose]

thanks Singh...haa...I thought it was a nice photo...glad you enjoyed...:)

[s y e]

This piece right here, is total perfection! P-E-R-F-E-C-T-I-O-N!

[SyberRose]

Thank you sweetie...glad you liked it hugss

[s y e]

Pleasure. Hugs.

[Frieda P]

Enchanting is the first word that comes to mind, not that it isn't expected in a SyberRose piece of work, lovely as always. 'Blinded with insanity' sounds like a crazy kind of love....

[SyberRose]

Love is insanity ha...and thank you Frieda for peeking in this morning...hugss

[Frieda P]

I'll agree with you there, my pleasure!

[Einstein Noodle]

hmmmmmmmmm! sex dreams; floating, flying dreams. some of the most exciting and meaningful, thinks i. you have a wonderful way with words, Syber!

E.

[SyberRose]

Thank you E...and for peeking in this morning...appreciate the visit...Rose:)

[ANTO]

Its beautiful Rose, just beautiful
X

[SyberRose]

Thank you Anthony...so glad you liked this piece...hugs

[Soma-ko]

Lovely poem with soft words, that feel heavy. Much enjoyed. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Soma...nice to hear from you today as always...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The past can certainly haunt us in our dreams... fantastical work Ms Rose

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Dale for peeking in this morning...Rose:)...always nice hearing from you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always nice peeking in on you... good morning.

[Lydia Shutter]

Agitated dreams....those blue eyes will cause them every time, won't they? I liked the alliteration in "serenade the serpentine stars". Beautifully written and presented. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you Lydia...and I appreciate your sweet comments...Rose:)

[emmajoy]

Your choice of picture and words makes a perfect couple. You weave your words longside the flesh colours yet finish with a near play of delicate veils. Wonderful: '.. And whispers of beguiling voice ~ serenade the serpentine stars~ '

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Emma...and so nice to hear from you today...Rose:)

[emmajoy]

:) my pleasure. Having to grab time in here, read quickly but carefully, then jump right back into a world that begs for duster and dog.walking!

[Nkosana B Masuku]

"She becomes blinded with insanity
floating aimlessly in mid air
spinning without a parachute
into a net of delectation" Beautiful line.Quite a great poem as a whole.loved the read :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Nkosana for visiting this evening...Rose:)