Fate of Eternity

Sands of yesteryear echoing in the wind

Upon shores where invisible footprints wander

And ebony blue waves whisper secrets of lovers past

within the soft vibration of the breeze~

 

Vivacious curves of the hourglass flow

Into the undeniable arms of destiny

 

 

And the haunted ships of forevermore

navigate without a compass in the sea

propelled by the fate of eternity~

 

And the salty perfume of the sea nymphs

lure lonely sailors to their death~

 

 While a message in a bottle

lies upon sea glass shores

            where invisible footprints wander~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Zahra]

And the haunted ships of forevermore
navigate without a compass in the sea
propelled by the fate of eternity~

beautiful imagery, wonderfully penned poem

[SyberRose]

Thank you and i'm glad you enjoyed this piece:)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Lovely imagery you used on this poem.Enjoyed it.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Nkosana...appreciate your visit...:)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

its my pleasure

[Frieda P]

Stellar Rose, love your work, especially when you include the sea, I'm all in, the imagery was outstanding...brava!!

[SyberRose]

thank you Frieda and i added birthday music to the birthday post...it wasnt there when you posted to it...thanks again for peeking in:)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, really enjoyed this one, will check out the other post too. :-)

[MOON]

Poignant lovely write great imagery and the picture tells a story too.

[SyberRose]

thank you so much...and for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Excellent work Rose just Magnificent work indeed :)
Loved your forte :)
- Singh :)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Singh...appreciate your visit today...Rose:)

[Angi]

All those broken hearts before us, Rose! We still keep walking in their footsteps because love hurts so good. The descriptions and imagery were lovely. Sea nymphs are a favorite whimsy for me! The picture my mind paints is a lusty one! Angi~

[SyberRose]

Thank you Angi...yes you have to love those sea nymphs and mermaids ha...Rose:)

[Rafia ~ Yellow Girl]

An hour glass, the sailors, message in a bottle... I love the connection bonding them all; your idea is really different and the picture's giving the perfect touch to your writing :)

[SyberRose]

Hi Rafia...thank you so much for peeking in this morning...I do appreciate it...Rose

[Cassie]

Wow!! nice to see you Rose, loved the imagery. Good work

[SyberRose]

Hi Cassie dear...nice to see you too as always...glad you liked this piece...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Haunting imagery; the water does have an eternal quality, which you have captured in this write. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita...good to see you...:)

[NA]

Oh I love this, it has everything in it that fascinates me...bravo on a superb read hun :) x

[SyberRose]

thank you dear Raven...and good to see you tonight...hugss