As The Sun Goes Down

Does the sun compete with the stars?

      while the moon covets from afar

Is the morning jealous of the night?

      as it yearns for moonlight~

Until the evenings rendezvous

       stealing a moment till adieu,

Although parting is sweet sorrow

      they long again for tomorrow~

 

When the heartbeat of temptation

      hides in shadows of disguise,

The brazing sun goes down

      and moon and stars arise~

They share the seabed of the ocean

      Ménage à trois of devotion~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Jack...]

Once again, pure beauty in mesmerizing words. Each time I read you Rose I think it can not get any better and each time I read you I prove myself wrong. Very nice my friend.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jack...so nice of you to say...and i heard you on the radio...you were great as always...:)

[Jack...]

You are very welcome Rose and thank you so much.

[Tom]

Menage a trois ! The Sun & Stars and then the covetousness Moon, pure poetic honey ! And what a photograph to introduce this eternal love triangle !

( Just one critical point if I may Rose, what about substituting rise with arise? Seems to flow better)

[SyberRose]

Yes you are right..i changed it...thank you Tom for peeking in this morning...:)

[Tom]

You're quite welcome Rose