Sandcastle of Love

collaboration with an old friend.

We walked along each gentle beach
Once covered in sands of love
Our footprints left a paired impress
Warmed by the sun above ~

We packed the scoops of firm wet grains
With laughing playful skill
Until we had a castle built
To hide our passion’s thrill~

A salty zephyr kissed our skin
In sands of amber stars
The song of glimmer in our eyes
Within strings of wind’s guitar~

Faint ocean whispers in moonlight
Softly crept along the shoals
A pharos lit waves of passion
In heartbeats of two souls~

By

SyberRose and friend Greymouser

Author's Note

Pharos is a tower with a light warning ships of nearby shoals

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

What collaborations can do and produce . All beautiful and amazing...Thank you for sharing beautiful poetry...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...Im glad you enjoyed this collaboration...thanks for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Still peeking...You are welcome...:)

[SyberRose]

haa...this is my favorite pic of you...the one where you are peeking

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Thank you kindly...:)

[Jack...]

Beautiful sweet Rose and Greymouser. Soft sand and love, the sound of the waves and a warm sun, nothing better in my mind. You two did a wonderful job with this poem and set my mind to daydreaming.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jack...i wrote a couple more with him too...glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose

[Jack...]

You are very welcome my friend. I loved it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this...reminds me of people i have been so close to...ones where there was a mutual attraction but we never acted upon it for one reason or another...

we knew that was dangerous territory, so instead, we just built sandcastles.

nicely penned.

jacob

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jacob...im glad you enjoyed this as i wrote it with my friend Mike quite a long time ago, a poet from another forum...he used to go by the name whiteRino too.