Ripples of a Carnal Moon

In wilderness of an Alaskan sky

the lovely goddess of the dawn

Aurora Borealis

streaks nakedly across the morn~

 

The artistic canvas of the earth

is painted in a vibrant hue

And with rays of golden hair

and ocean depths of azure blue~

 

 

 As nuances of red in the sunset

bathe in wavelets of a tropical lagoon

A flowing waterfall of bliss

drowns within ripples of a carnal moon~ 

 

 

The whispering winds of yesterday

flutters to the other side of light

like wings of an Adonis Butterfly

escaping beneath the glass of the night.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Soma-ko]

Beautiful and soft imagery. Enjoyed. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you for peeking in and happy you liked this one...:)

[Loki's Thrall]

Wow. This was amazing. I love the way you describe the wonders of nature with such beautiful words.

[SyberRose]

thank you so much and I I'm happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose

[Loki's Thrall]

I loved it. :3

[William J. Marsh]

Rose this is so delightfully sensuous, and brings out the mystery of the beauty in nature. What a wonderful scene.

[SyberRose]

Thank you again William...and so glad you enjoyed this piece...appreciate your visit...Rose:)

[Sheila Kline]

The imagery you have conveyed in this absolutely beautiful poem is amazing! The words are so lovely that I feel as if I have just viewed the "Mona Lisa" of poetry! And your presentation is mesmerizing! The image is striking and sets the initial tone for what is to follow.

[SyberRose]

WOW...what a nice thing to say...and i'm happy you enjoyed it Sheila...thanks for peeking in today:)

[Angi]

Oh Rose, seeing the Aurora Borealis is on my bucket list. I cannot imagine how it would feel to be out far from the dulling city lights. The swirling colors would be so mesmerising and magical. Lovely, lovely! Angi~

[SyberRose]

You will have to take a cruise to Alaska maybe...i love the Alaska shows on tv...thanks Angi:)

[B-poet]

An eloquent masterpiece. It's nice to know I've collaborated with you. There's something uniquely special about how you've penned this particular poem. It's a beautiful & wonderful write from you. Loved the format & font as well. Keep up the captivating work SyberRose. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so very much Brian...as I told you that's my son's name too...and yes I remember our poem...and thank you for that awesome review...I appreciate your sweet comments:)

[Pryde Foltz]

A lovely write from the most lovely of Roses. Thank you.

[SyberRose]

Awwww...thank you Pryde...and i'm happy you enjoyed this...:) thanks for peeking in.

[Eddie Phillips]

Wow that was incredibly beautiful. I read it twice because it was so well done. Thank you for sharing this gem of perfection.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Eddie and i'm glad you enjoyed this piece...appreciate your visit today...Rose:)

[Betty]

It's incredible how you illustrate the beauty of nature with your words. I love this poem and the images is wonderful as well.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Betty and thank you for peeking in this afternoon....Rose:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Nature's beauty woven with with thread of sensuality! What gorgeous imagery you have served up here, Rose. "The whispering winds of yesterday" line gives this poem a big of a poignant feel. The graphic you chose to accompany your words is a vision of blue loveliness. Just a wonderful package. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Lydi...and for your lovely comments...Rose:)