Dewdrop Upon The Rose

As the black sarong of a shadow falls

                the welcoming arms of evening are nigh

and the breeze of enchantment calls

                kissing  bosom of the sunset goodbye~

 

Yet, the moon upon the pillow of night

                leaves a dewdrop upon the rose

and tender wounds of the night heal

                as blue iris in the sky glows~

 

Within the ambiance of a heartbeat

                the roots of a weeping willow run deep

along the weary path of destiny

                where shadows of  fate sleep~

 

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[WILDERNESS]

wonderful, the poetry is just superb, amazing. Just that the ending should be as cheerful as ur smile ......

[SyberRose]

Thank you Wil...i guess fate can be happy too though...not just sad ha...Rose

[ANTO]

My word - you're up early this morning Rose

[SyberRose]

Well sort of Anthony...drinking my coffee..hug

[ANTO]

Coffee hugs - best kind of coffee, best kind of hug... hey I should be writing tag lines lol

[SyberRose]

You are though ha...you're the best tagger here

[ANTO]

Well I've been called worse things....lol ;)
Hows that coffee going down?

[SyberRose]

Down down down ha

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really beautiful in description as are all your pieces, but this one has a haunting feeling of sadness to it.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jacob and i'm glad you enjoyed...yes I think you are right...Rose

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Completely stunning and so tender of a read.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Travis...and so nice of you to peek in this evening...Rose:)

[Distantview123]

A very lyrical and poetic write, full of delightful imagery. Well penned! ~ Robert.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Robert for peeking in today...appreciate your comments...Rose

[s y e]

Woo, my Rose is back. YAY!

I loved this write, you write so eloquently, this is amazing as always. I loved it.

Hugs xox

[SyberRose]

Thank you hon...i'm glad you liked it..and thank you for peeking in as alway...hugss

[Rita L. Sev]

So glad you are back, Rose - your gorgeous poems are much needed beauty in a hectic day...

Yet, the moon upon the pillow of night
leaves a dewdrop upon the rose...

Lovely!

[SyberRose]

thank you Rita and i'm sure you are having hectic days now...with those sweet little kids haa...

[ANTO]

"the moon upon the pillow of night" - I dont know how you do it Rose but you DO!! A never-ending cornucopia of celestial-sensuality - done as effortlessly as the magician pulling the handkerchief garlands from their sleeve

Bravo!
X

[SyberRose]

Awww...thank you Anthony...so nice of you to say...Hug

[Tom]

And as night time falls, so awakens new passions and desires and who knows where fate will lead you !

Beautiful imagery as day becomes night as smoldering, simmering senses become inflamed!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Tom...as they say...never say never again...glad you enjoyed...Rose

[Sami Khalil]

"Yet, the moon upon the pillow of night

leaves a dewdrop upon the rose

and tender wounds of the night heal

as blue iris in the sky glows~
"
Beautiful imagery , glowing passions , healing whispers...Bravo...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Sami and so happy you enjoyed this piece today...thank you for taking time to comment as always...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)

[Angi]

There she is! We need these softly falling rains here in the Cafe, Rose. Don't you go again! Angi~

[SyberRose]

Aww...thank you Angi..it was a mistake to leave in the first place...but i've been known to make mistakes haa...hugss