Crystal Blue Waters

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Crystal blue waters are calling to me,

within the whirlpool of your eyes

I melt within your soft whispers,

and the ebb and flow of the tides

The fruit of your kiss deliciously sweet;

the nectar of your lips I crave.

I feel the sweet warmth of your body,

flowing over me like a tidal wave.

Wispy locks of your light brown hair

blowing in the midnight winds

Walking along the sands of the beach,

and stars in your eyes within;

Crystal blue waters are calling to me,

as my reflection in your eyes I see.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Sigh....how do you do it Rose?? Every poem you write is so beautifully romantic. I know each one I read will touch my heart as this one has! ;-)

[SyberRose]

Thanks so much...i'm happy you enjoyed it Red...and so nice to hear from you tonight...hugs

[Aethereal]

This is extremely beautiful. It inspired me to write another version of your first verse using another rhyme scheme which you may keep as your own as a gift:

Eyes

Harmonious waters call forth to me
from blue crystal pools in your eyes
cresting like ascending waves from the sea
pulled up by the Moon on the rise.

[SyberRose]

Thank you for that beautiful review and lovely poem...thank you so much. I appreciate it.
Rose:)

[Aethereal]

You're welcome!

[Tom]

The all encompassing crystal blue water intently urging the two lovers to swoon as they walk hand in hand by the seashore on a tranquil clear evening !

The romance so passionately oozes out in this piece Rose...splendidly so I say !

[SyberRose]

Thank you Tom...I appreciate your visit as always...Rose:)

[Me]

simply stunning Rose..the artwork is divine too :) x

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Raven...yes i love the painting...:)

[Adam Whitworth]

Yes, that is a really good read, thankyou syberrose

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Adam for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Pryde Foltz]

A moment of sensual zen. Thank you.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Pryde and you are welcome...Rose:)

[Jack...]

So very beautiful sweet Rose. The title brought to mind the Tommy James and the Shondell's "Crystal Blue Persuasion" ah-ah, it's a new sensation.

This poem is as beautiful as the poet.

[SyberRose]

Oh yes i remember that...thank you Jack for peeking in this morning with your sunshine shirt...:)

[s y e]

Oh Rose - this is just lovely, you always take me on an incredible journey!

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Sye...nice to hear from you today...Rose..hugs

[L.u.c.a.s.]

You really take me there, a wonderful read!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Dustin...i'm glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Angi]

I am about to go to bed and I knew I could count on you to lull me into the sweetest of dreams. Thank you, Rose! This is lovely. Angi~

[SyberRose]

Thank you Angi...and sweet dreams to you tonight...hugs

[Angi]

You too, sweets.