If I Should Falter

If I should falter please forgive me

for not walking the path of perfection,

 as I would gladly caress your troubled brow

if you stumbled upon my heart;

 as I carry endurance well~

 

I did not blink as I learned

the new found language

of bohemian desires and a new wealth of

                inspiration to discover~

 

So when I feel unjust ~ I'll try to remember

I wasn't born in hell,

but from the womb of understanding

upon a foolhardy night.

 

@SyberRose

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my goodness ..the twist at the end totally surprised me!! what an adventure ... had to read this over a couple times ..i also am especially touched by the last two lines in the first verse ..you speak of one of the greater strengths in women ...patience and endurance ...unfortunately also can be a weakness when taken advantage of ... so glad i found this one Ms. Syber!
E.

[s y e]

Aw rose, this is amazing!!!! I love the wording of this write, it is superb - You always write such amazing poems and have such a meaningful message.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sye...and so nice hearing from you as always sweetie...Hugss

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like the humanism in this piece. It speaks to the sympathetic voice inside us all calling us to remember that we are all flawed creatures and we must forgive one another as we hope to be forgiven of our own faults and flaws.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Fabian...and i'm happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Aethereal]

You have some very creative lines in this poem. Perhaps we’re each crafted from one of Nature’s whimsical designs upon a loom of understanding. Each of us is a beautifully woven work of art. Imperfection may be nowhere to be found.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for peeking in today Aethereal...nice to hear from you...Rose:)

[ANTO]

Simply blown away - a magnum 45 of a piece Rose. Outstanding
XXX

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Anthony...so glad you liked this piece and good to have you back here again...xo

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This was so endearing. Luckily, the heart that truly loves us, doesn't expect perfection, just sincerity. Your words are dripping with just that in this piece. Well done, Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Travis...and nice to hear from you as always...Rose:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Your modesty and apologetic stance, works wonders here, very good.

[SyberRose]

Thank you again for taking time to read and comment Sheema...Rose:)

[Cassie]

but from the womb of understanding upon a foolhardy night...This is one of the best lines I have read so far, this is so true and we should always remember that

[SyberRose]

Thank you Cassie...im happy you enjoyed...hugss

[Pryde Foltz]

So when I feel unjust ~ I'll try to remember
I wasn't born in hell,
but from the womb of understanding
upon a foolhardy night.


Rose...wow...wow. Such amazing, amazing words.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Pryde...happy you liked this piece...Rose:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I love this sincere plight! Interesting piece again! Thanks for the RRs. I get the chance to read your great works. :x

[SyberRose]

thank you for reading Blue..nice to hear from you again today... Rose:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Yes, just stealing time to drop by. I'm getting busier and busier. ;) Glad you're well.

[SyberRose]

well thank you for sharing your time with me..:)