Until You Return

 My soft whispers flow like Chianti

through the Venice canal...upon the

erogenous shorelines of your earlobe;

as I hold the sweet taste of your scent

sweet wafting ~ within the gondolas of the night__

as the red tint of my Pouty lips tattoo

a memory of sinful pleasure and invisible images~

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 As fickle tides splash freely upon the dawn,

 I will await your return and surrender

 within the bedroom of your eyes__

 as you leave me with the last whisper

 of heated song  "Ti amo" 

 my insatiable inamorato~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

While i am into substance i must say Venice Oh yeah there were days when i could be a cheap date lol

[SyberRose]

Haa...pizza in Venice ...sounds nice to me....thanks for peeking in Tate...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Chianti, Venice, and the promise of romance... Sounds like heaven!

[SyberRose]

Yes ha...it does...thanks Rita for peeking in...Rose:)

[icelandicblue]

Ah romance in Venice. You have captured the magic in this piece Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much ...glad you liked this piece...Rose:)

[Will Neill]

Rose, I think you are a hopeless romantic, each word brought me to Venice and captured the moment.
Great Work.
Will

[SyberRose]

Thank you Will...yes I guess I am..ha...thank you for peeking in this morning...Rose:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so romantic, so romantic

"within the bedroom of your eyes"

splended line...it's time for more wine and more of rose's words.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jacob...i'm happy you liked this piece...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

I love Venice, I love this poem Rose!!

I will await your return and surrender
within the bedroom of your eyes__
as you leave me with the last whisper
of heated song "Ti amo"
my insatiable inamorato~

Be still my heart...did I say I love this one?! :-)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Frieda...I was hoping you would ha...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

With my whole entire heart, my pleasure :-)

[MikeV]

Very beautiful, Rose :)
Very romantic, my favorites were the ending lines :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Mike...and for peeking in...glad you liked those lines...:)

[Aethereal]

Venezia is the erogenous earlobe of Italy, a hundred tiny islands connected by canals having an ancient gondola love-boat transportation system. Paris is the erogenous earlobe of France. I'm not sure if England has anything to compare to either. I enjoyed the Italian terms.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for that lovely review...and nice to hear from you today...Rose:)

[Aethereal]

You're welcome!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is delicious Rose! I love the tender moments of that "last whisper"... that did for me...

So Romantic...the passion flows freely within the ambiance of your painting...

Wonderfully penned!~xoxo~:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Robbie and for peeking in this afternoon...I'm happy you liked this piece...:)hugs

[Jack...]

Very beautiful Rose. I am not sure if you wrote this poem to the painting you have attached or found the painting afterward, but regardless, both are over the top beautiful. The words fit the painting perfectly and the painting, I can hear your poem being sung by the gondolier. Very nice my friend.

[SyberRose]

thank you very much Jack...I wrote the poem first...im glad you enjoyed both...Rose:)