Dusk to Dawn

The white satin tides fall softly

upon the shoulder of the shore

as dusk removes the sarong

of a pink particle sunset

 

While the candelabra of the stars

            sing a harmonious song of luster

 the nuances of the wind shadow dance

            across the mind of a stranger

 

The wingspan of an incarnadine moon

drifts to the other side

and the aubade of the dawn

            awaits for destiny to arrive

 

As the esoteric secret of lovers

vanish with the ebb of the tides

back into the undulating waves

            of the tumultuous sea.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Lily Finch]

lovely imagery .... and this one is beautiful "
The white satin tides fall softly
upon the shoulder of the shore"..love it

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Lily and have a wonderful new year...Rose:)

[Lily Finch]

same to you :)

[Tom]

So intense are the rich hues in this tapestry of love and romance, the sea is awash in swooning ecstasy !

[SyberRose]

Thank you Tom for peeking in...and glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Soma-ko]

I like how you enjoy creating imagery of scenery, how you describe the beauties of nature, complimentary to the original message. Your words along with the font, gives me the sense of a soft rumination, as one dreams. Enjoyed.
-Soma

[SyberRose]

Happy New Year to you Soma...and so glad you enjoyed this one...hugs

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Dream-like imagery. I love the scene, Rose. Thank you for taking me there. ;)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Blue for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Cassie]

Another breathtaking write. Amazingly done. Loved each bit of it. This one is shelved too. hugs hugs

[SyberRose]

thank you again dear...so glad you liked this piece...hugss

[Antoñyo]

A therapeutic wash of mind and spirit I thoroughly enjoyed.

Thanks for the share

[SyberRose]

thank you Antonyo and you are welcome...glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)

[Angi]

Even after a really long or hard day, I come into the Cafe to try and unwind and sometimes, I just cannot slow my brain down. Your poem here is such a soft wash of colors and feelings. Thank you, Rose. Beautiful. Angi~

[SyberRose]

Thank you Angi...something about poetry and the cafe that does calm us...and it's nice to know that we can do that to the readers...I know it calms my soul...hugs

[s y e]

Beautiful as always Rose. Everytime I read you I need to take a deep breath and take it all in. You blow me away each time.

[SyberRose]

Ahhh...such a sweet thing to say...thank you Sye...Hugsss

[Latifa]

your poem entered i joy to my heart and spiritual satisfaction well done

[SyberRose]

Thank you Latifa...and for taking time to comment...Rose:)

[Latifa]

no problem hon xx