Aura of Seduction

I fall like silk organza

upon dulcet tones of the night

as long eyelashes flutter upon

the encounter of your earlobe

  as pearlescent beads

whisper upon passionate pores

 

The candle of night empurples

the shadow of make believe

 as the tango of candlelight

consumes us like a sponge

 

 And the aura of seduction

surrounds our soul;

and I wish time could stand still

as teardrops flow slowly

into a meandering river of no return

 

The wraith of romance

vanishes in the twilight hour,

just before the scent of the morning dew

and the chatoyant luster of love

                        remains a fleeting mystery.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Hannah]

This is so beautiful, I'm in awe of how you always find the perfect words and create such a strong image in my mind... It has such a melodic flow and describes a moment that I think everyone longs to have in their lives... Once again, another great read :)

[SyberRose]

thank you Hannah so much for peeking in...Rose:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

This could be written in a foreign language by you and it would still be really good to read and recite not doubt, a masterful piece full of aura and atmosphere.

[SyberRose]

Thank you again Sheema for taking time to read and comment...I appreciate your visits...Rose:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

ohhhh very romantic and dreamy! Somehow this makes me think of candlelight dinners or nighttime stroll in the seashore....

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Blue...and for peeking in...Rose:)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Rose... beautiful love poem...
enchanting as the night's dream come
In morning light betrothed. truly... Pat

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Pat...Glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose

[Cassie]

Wow!!!!! this is so beautiful particularly the last two stanzas, love it all my dear friend. Thank you for the RR. Now shelved

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Cassie...so glad you enjoyed this and it is always nice hearing from you...hugsss

[Jeremiah Castelo De Guz..]

Very beautiful. I really like your choice of words for this poem. "Empurple" is not a word I hear everyday, however, you've managed to use it perfectly.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Jeremiah and i'm glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Great choice of vocabulary in this one, Rose. The romantic fantasy is rich and the longing is very real. Beautifully written. Lydi**

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Lydi and so happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Tom]

Sadly all good things come to an end though it was jolly good while it lasted !

Splendidly enchanting and romantic !

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Tom for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Pryde Foltz]

And the aura of seduction
surrounds our soul;
and I wish time could stand still
as teardrops flow slowly
into a meandering river of no return

Lovely poem; extraordinarily lovely wish found in this stanza above.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Pryde for peeking in today..Rose

[B-poet]

You paint such marvelous romantic & passionate imagery with your words. Keep that light of written inspiration burning within your soul. You've got a lot more masterpieces to write in the future. Great work as always SyberRose. A compelling read. :)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Brian and so nice of you to say...i hope I have more in me...ha....Rose:)