A Decollete Night

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Nocturnal songs bloom with blending of souls

upon a decollete negligee night

a whisper of stars kiss softly our skin

as silhouettes tango in candlelight

 

 

Your sighs are pleasing like a nightingale

as if in Elysian fields we drift

and you are my bird of paradise

in an exotic vase of surrender~

 

And within ecstasy of sheet music

are the tears of crystal orb and rapture

flowing within rarity of our bliss,

and sweet fruit of our dew kissed lips.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

Wow! What I wouldn't give to be in this poem right now. Your giving me shivers.

[Daffy]

A very romantic read. The words flow very well, and I could use these words when the time is right within that candlelight.....may I borrow them?

[SyberRose]

Yes you may ...ha...glad you liked them Daffy...and nice hearing from you.Rose:)

[Daffy]

your welcome, Rose....

[noone]

Very nice. I liked the word choice a lot. It paints a very serene picture. Good job.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sammi...and happy holidays to you...Rose:)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Really lovely word choice, Rose. You paired unsuspecting words and produced a beautiful poetic picture. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Blue and I appreciate your visit this morning...Rose:)

[Eric Jameson]

lovely, lovely similes and very well thought out for a short picture poem. I loved it, very nice...E.J.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Eric for taking time to comment...Rose:)

[Tom]

I see two waif like fairy-elves entwined in love dancing together in a clearing neath the light of a luminous moon, hidden away within a thickly wooded magical forest !

A beautiful image intensifying write SyberRose !

[SyberRose]

I'm glad you liked it Tom...and thank you for your sweet comments as always...Rose:)

[Shaun Payton]

To leave one breathless you have achieved with this poetry. Its intoxicating romantical reading

[SyberRose]

thank you Shaun for peeking in...so nice to hear from you...Rose:)

[Shaun Payton]

:) I been sick and stuff. Getting better.

[SyberRose]

Happy new year to you Shaun...:)

[Shaun Payton]

Happy New Year Rose!:)

[Trace]

very sensual and romantic, I was thrown a bit by the rhyme pattern: abcb in the first verse, then no rhyme in the next two, but it is still beautiful.

[SyberRose]

thank you Trace...yes sometimes i'm a rebel with the stanzas ha...Rose:)

[ron]

This is very romantic Rose. It sounds like the perfect night.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Ron for peeking in...Rose:)

[ron]

You are most welcome Rose:)

[Rafia ~ Yellow Girl]

It's as if jewels are engraved in each word my dear Rose! :) lovely piece.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rafia...Rose:)