Everyday without you is a bad day

Everyday without you is a bad day

Everyday without you is a bad day. . .
Is it the same for you?
Sorry if i seem like its too much
I just don't want to loose you
When you see me
What do you think?
I know what I'm thinking. . .
Everyday without you is a bad day . . .
Whenever i see you the world freezes
The way i feel when I'm with you
My mind eases
Whoever tells you this wouldn't last
Just tell them to kiss my a*s.
Everyday without you is a bad day. . .
I cant see myself with out you
Now that your here
There's nothing i wouldn't do
to keep you near
Your the best in me
And i hope its the same for you
Cause baby just let me tell you
Your amazing, wonderful, lovely in every way
Let me just hear you say
3 little words that would make my day
Please just say; i love you.
Cause baby,
Everyday without you is a bad day. . .

Author's Note

Tell me what you think please.
Err... grammar isn't my best so please ignore the grammar problems.
Thanks.

Reviews

[Emma Lee]

God, Sydney! You effing suck!

I'm kidding, this is good, kinda reminds me of that song 'A day without you is like a year without rain'. o-o

I really don't know what to say sine I'm only doing this to get my 'Top Reviewers badge!' 8D

Love you!!!

-Emily Leanne-

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is a fantastic peice

[angelicwriter]

Great poem anyone can relate to it whcih makes it so intresting and amazing. i feel like you wrote everything that im feeling about a crush. Good job (:

[John Stussy]

Elegant, heart-felt, and gentle, this poem is magnificent. Love incurs poems that tend to get repetitive, but you wrote something good here. Keep up the great work.