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Why am I me? Why must I bear this soul?
I was supposed to be an angel, but I can't fulfil this role,
I was naturally loving, love was all I had; yet pinch by pinch it's been taken, now I'm broken & sad!
I'd give anything to again be he, the lad I was before becoming me!
When I knew who I wanted I could win their heart, but that was long ago, when it felt like the start.
Now i'm still only part way through, but I wish it was the end; how am I supposed to continue, and to love, when there's nothing even to lend!
Every day I try to find reason, but little comes to mind; I just want to finally submit... but life is not that kind!

Reviews

[Molly K]

This poem has so much deep emotion running through it, it really touches the heart! Amazing use of language.

[Yehman84]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it 😊