Dream Girl pt. 2. The Search begins

Continuation from Dream Girl, Part 2 is about what drives him not to give up on her existence...

I woke up and tried to recall
her face from my dream.
I never can, but it's become,
my morning dream routine.

This time though, was different,
and as I sat in my bed,
sorting through the Monday morning thoughts
scattered through my head,

Something flashed, then ignited
then forced me to pause.
Something I remember
about my girl with no flaws.

You see, I changed my routine.
I stopped thinking about her face,
and focussed on finding
her name in it's place.

And now I know she exists.
If you don't believe me, it's fine.
But as I was thinking of her name,
I heard her voice whisper mine...

Reviews

[Sirius King]

good stuff,,, i think ima fan

[Javan]

thanks!

[Sirius King]

ur welcome

[Negomi]

Such a lovely poem! I like the fact that it could be about a girl you have seen in reality or just you dreams.

[Javan]

Have you read part 1?

[Negomi]

Yup, at the start she seems real but the last part, 'because until I find her,
my imagination is where she sleeps.' suggests that she is not?

[Javan]

Yep.

The 1st one is dreaming about the perfect girl.
Part 2 is knowing she's out there somewhere,
and when I find her in real life I'll write part 3!

[Negomi]

Aww, that's a good trilogy =].