An Existentialist Poem

deep in the forest, a shot rang out
at least
I thought it did
or
someone
wanted me to
go to
line one
    ~

 

Reviews

[Tom]

Like a shot in the dark or a single star in a universe of infinity.......The minds boggles !!!

Absorbing and confounding Dean !

[Sami Khalil]

Starting from the beginning after all said and done ( the failures I guess ) and have a new slate on life or marriage or relationships with different choices. A wise up indeed from past mistakes...Bravo

[Dean]

Perhaps you take more from this than intended, but then that's one of the bennies of writing, isn't it?

[Sami Khalil]

True ...You are welcome , sir...:)...........................

[Neville]

J.P Sartre would be proud of you once of course he got his head round it. Very good indeed.

AGT's,

N

[Dean]

Thank you.

[Angi]

I am still trying to figure out the chicken and the egg thing. Clever, clever. This one has me grinning, Dean. Angi~

[Dean]

three ladies in a row that I admire. What can I say, girls, but a big gracias.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Haha I'm laughing at this one...clever, my friend. If there is a shot in the forest and there is no one around to hear it, does it make a sound? Well, I suppose it does, as there has to be someone to shoot the gun, right? :) Nicely written.

[Dean]

three ladies in a row that I admire. What can I say, girls, but a big gracias.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Funny. Your words resounded like the echo of that shot in the forest. This is very clever. Well done!

[Dean]

three ladies in a row that I admire. What can I say, girls, but a big gracias.

[Chris]

This one brought a chuckle... of agreement and understanding ...out.

[Dean]

I expected as much. :-)