Stereo

An ode to music.

The rhythm is in time with my soul
and all I really need is that rock n roll
The bass sends friction to my mind,
tellin' me its time to unwind.

It took me so long
but I found myself in his song.
It took me years to find this wisdom;
now I will retreat to the kingdom I come from.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A good ode to music...Bravo

[Emily Irene.]

Thank you. :]

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

[Baban.A.A]

well, it was very complexsive to me reading it, so it took me twice to get to the point hidden ben the poem. finding the wisdom to understand the song he is singing may mean the time the speaker needed to obtain the space in his heart. all in all well done and best luck

[Emily Irene.]

I know its not quite done going through the editing process, the last two lines don't feel right but they're also my favorite and what I built it around. I'm working on it. But thank you. :]

[Baban.A.A]

most welcome.....