Whispers of Love

Comparing the existence of love to wind

Whispering winds crept up to me

flowing, blowing, surrounding me

With each breath they came into me

and halted me in my stride

From chills to sweats they carried me

in ups and downs they buried me

Now all that's left is memories

of when love was by my side

Reviews

[JenniferMarie]

So beautiful. I really liked:

Whispering winds crept up

flowing, blowing, surrounding me

I could feel that and got pulled int he poem right away.

Last two lines are beautiful.

Well done.

[SweetT]

Thanks Jennifer! Really appreciate it.