My Secret

Try to find my secret

Bury me bury me bury me well
As I stay over here and dwell
My soul is not ment sell
As your mind cannot tell
Search the roof
But still there is no proof
End your tireless journey
As your not funny
But you hop like a bunny
Even if its not sunny
You won't get away with money
I look right into your desire
Which is left into the fire
I threw the treasure in the sea
You will never find my secret
So let it be

Author's Note

What do you think on this poem

Reviews

[Emily]

I really like this one!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Emily

[wordman]

flowed like a river,when i read it made me quiver,hell i may find quick silver

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you wordman

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Jamestown]

Great flowing piece of work, it seemed to roll of my tongue while reading.
You always have creative flowing writes, this was was great, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

I have seen very little of you lately, nice to see you
and your wonderful work, hope you will give me some
feedback on my new pieces:)

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you James. Currently I am busy looking for a job as a writer. so that's why I don't come so often

[Jamestown]

That is great, I will pray for you my friend!

[Confuser]

I thought it was great! Wonderful rhyming and theme. Beautiful rhymes to a great ending. Chang you are doing quite well. So let it be. It's as thought, you didn't think at all, and let the words flow. I ook right into your desire, which is left into the fire. I really enjoyed it. Thank you. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

You are welcome and thank you for the great review

[Confuser]

Y/W Chang, have a wonderful weekend.

[Terrence Chang]

Same to you Confuser

[Confuser]

Guten tag.