The Secret of the Sky

The sky that revolve around us ,
with the clouds that are being carried by .
Each cloud has few drops to spare for us ,
and these drop are very precious to us cause
beside giving the nature its power and energy ,
it plays an emotionally vital role on us.

Each drops that comes in a form of a rain.
Has always touched someone's life by itself .
It hide the tears of joy and sorrow unwillingly .
That has filled in a human being as all of us .
And when the drop touches any one of us ,
it ease the pressure of sorrow and joys in us
Not only that, it will also connect with us .
By its crystal form to diffrent form of shape
and colour that is shown to our innocent eyes .

It brings us a new emotion of new memories
That is carried in our minds and in our hearts
And now the drop is washed away from us
with a meaning in us by another drop unto us
By either waiting for evaporating to the sky ,
or being flowed away into the large oceans .

Each drop has something to say to us with love .
That they are really thankfull to us to the most .
To allow them to come and sit on our body ,
giving them our meaning of life and spirit to them
And when gone back either to the cloud or the ocean .
These drops express their thought to other drops .
Encouraging them to come down with excitement .
And choose any one of us to join with us and know ,
that they will also enjoy like the previous one did .

But one fact remains that the drops ,
cannot speak to anyone of us and never will .
So we dont know its true emotions of the drops .
Just assuming that they have done their job .
And enjoyed their works to the fullest ,
and passes out without a word to us

Author's Note

This is my old poem that I found. I have written this in my 6th grade. I wish keep it the same so ignore my grammar and enjoy your read

Reviews

[Lizardo]

This is really really good
I love the thoughts in this poem
Great piece of work!
a lot of good philosophy here

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Lizardo

[Lizardo]

You're welcome

[Confuser]

Chang, I really enjoyed it; quite interesting; your thoughts about a rain drop and you wrote in the 6th grade. Wow. Thank you so much. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Dale

[Confuser]

Keep it forever. You never know, one day when you are MUCH older you may share it with your son or daughter. Y/W.

[Terrence Chang]

All these poems that I am writing will one day turn into a book and it will be my whisper to generations and generations. I hope for that

[Confuser]

Oh, I believe that!!! What I MEANT was the ORIGINAL POEM!!! From when you were in the six grade. I'm sorry I didn't explain that silly. I am quite sentimental. Have all kinds of things from my children. You will succeed and have a wonderful book and know I WILL BUY IT!!! I have confidence in you and am a fan of your work. Never give up on writing!!!

[Terrence Chang]

I will never ever give up on writing. Words has been my life, my saviour and my protecter. In return I will guard it with my life. Thank you for reminding me and my reasons to live and write the right path.

[Confuser]

What's the saying: I've got your 6; (kids I guess), I've got your back...you can do it and don't let anyone tell you otherwise, EVER!!!

[Confuser]

What's the saying: I've got your 6; (kids I guess), I've got your back...you can do it and don't let anyone tell you otherwise, EVER!!!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Dale

[Confuser]

You're welcome. Going to sleep; Grammy's are Rockin' though. Bye.

[wordman]

well my friend you have been talented for a while

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you wordman

[wordman]

and again ,you are welcome

[Jamestown]

Fabulous my friend, if you wrote this in 6th grade, then you my friend
Were way ahead of your time, I can't write this well now, thanks for sharing.
Check out plant lust, I think you will get a laugh at the end, PTL!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you James