Leagues Of Men

Leagues of Men

Have come to earth

Who saw and conquered

The quest in their hands

Was executed by their glands

And was known in everyone's land

They rode their exiled fate

Taking their way to excellence

As they were saving humanity

Closures where never an option

Even if they were deemed as heretic

And their blood spitted on the wall

They all fell They all fell

At the hand of the useless spell

Author's Note

enjoy your stay and don't forget to review me please

Reviews

[Confuser]

You know I think you are a wonderful writer. Leagues of Men: Great title, and they have come & gone and will continue; death, war but what is the righteous cause: You made me wonder. The wording is great: The quest in their hands...I love it. Thank you. Dale
Have come to earth
Who saw and conquered
The quest in their hands
Was executed by their glands

And was known in everyone's land
They rode their exiled fate
Taking their way to excellence

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Dale. Thank you for such a wonderful review. I am truly honoured.

[Confuser]

You know I love your writing: It's like you think about people; their actions; asking a reader to ask why. Great writing. You are too kind young man!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Dale for such a lovely comment. I am flattered

[Confuser]

You're welcome; you are a very good writer. Believe in yourself.

[Lizardo]

This is a really creative poem Terrence, I love how you say that they were all heroes, that died for humanity, We don't see much of those now days.
Thank you for posting this excellent piece of poetry!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Lizardo. I am glad that you understood my poem and liked it

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Well done!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Emily

[wordman]

a moving write my friend that's what we have came too

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you wordman

[Jamestown]

This is so cool man and has so much truth, thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you James