What If Everyone

We all have some suffering

Everyone's light has to sink to the ground
What if he never had a light to start of

Everyone is destined for each other
What if he walks in the path of solitude

Everyone has a time to rise for the day
What if he never rose out from his bed

Everyone has a possessions to keep
What if he never had any possession

Everyone has hated someone on the way
What if he brought his madness and chaos

Everyone has a day of excellent work
What if he was born without a brain

Everyone celebrates their occasions
What if he celebrates the death

Everyone has to pay their sins one day
What if he is a god and cheated all day

Author's Note

This is one of my philosophical thought. This time it is not my writing but is to understand someone pain

Reviews

[Deboshmita]

Fab fab.......................................................................................fab

[Terrence Chang]

thank you debo

[Confuser]

Chang: I really like it you made me think: I have a bird brain sometimes, I think: But this is very interesting writing. I like the What if's; very well done. Thank you so much. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Dale. And please your not a bird brain. By the way you write I am sure that your very intellectual and intelligent lady.

[Confuser]

You are so kind: but if I write something alright, God is helping me: I get very confused with the words I want to express, but that's okay. I try.

[Confuser]

Still love it - re-read. Thank you so much. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you for your gentle words

[Confuser]

See Chang: Thank you for your "gentle" words: that's what a true poet would say. Wow. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Dale. I am flattered

[Confuser]

You're welcome.

[Confuser]

Two reviews are coming up Chang: I'm trying to copy it: was going to send you an email. Anyway.....I'll try again.: Dale

[wordman]

we all have a walk,we all have a time,to make things right,if only in our mind
alone were born and alone we die sometimes wehave a love that will cry sounds like a poem to me

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Wordman. I agree with what you say

[Emily]

I like how you start every stanza with 'Everybody'.
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Emily

[Jamestown]

Fabulous piece of work my friend, you always get my attention!
This is well written and the message is solid, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much James. I am happy that you liked it

[Jamestown]

I had to read it, one more time! Lol:) great job!