Make a wish

I hope that this doesn't just stay as a wish

Let's make a wish
A wish for no pretenders
So there are no lies and deceit

Let's make a wish
A wish for no money
So that we are not deprived

Let's make a wish
A wish for no power
So that they are no greed

Let's make a wish
A wish for no conspirators
So that we live freely

Let's make a wish
A wish for no foes
So that we live in harmony

Let's make a wish
A wish for no bullets
So that we don't kill each other

Let's make a wish
A wish of no dreams
So that we need not to desire

Let's make a wish
A wish of no alpha and omega
So that be live in equality

Let's make a wish
A wish of no religion
So that we are not God fearing
But nature's loving people

Let's make wish
A wish of no wish
So that our visions are in reality

Author's Note

I hope you all like it and thank you for reading my humble writing for the future

Reviews

[armin]

Very wise words terrence.
And your wishlist is what makes our peaceful, united and incredible.
I too wish if your wishlist could be fulfilled, that will make our place a better to live in.

Coming to my favourite part of the poem,
Let's make a wish
A wish for no power
So that they are no greed

I am agree power comes greed. Power is something which we need to embrace to be used in a right sense. Remember a movie dialogue when spiderman's uncle told him 'Great power comes great responsibility', very truly said.

An insightful write.
Well done.

armin. ...

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Armin for your gentle and constructive review. Uncle Ben made Peter Parker into Spiderman with that wise line

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I love your wish list, dear poet, and I agree

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Lynn. Thank you for calling me a poet and supporting my thought and cause

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You are a poet :)

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Lynn

[Confuser]

Chang: Seriously you left me someone in the outer atmosphere: This is a favorite forever. Awestruck.I'm looking at your bio: so blown away no words are close to my lip, my mind but glorious: I see your words About you: Passion for writing (this writing Screams to Everyone Passionate): Next immense: Your words are big as the Stars: Thank you. Magnificent, insightful. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Dale. You always make my day. The reviews that you give are always uplifting even though I write dark stuff.

[Confuser]

Hey young man; WOW; seriously fantastic!!!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you once again Dale

[Confuser]

You're welcome: take care of yourself. I hope you can take some time to go out with your friends and have fun! You deserve it. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

I don't have any. All I do is write. I am quite different from others so no one like being near me

[Confuser]

I don't believe that - I understand rejection; you just haven't been around the right people/you are kind and empathetic and oh my - I am here bugging you. I feel bad now: you have 1000 friends on f/b - no one ??? no one??? silly; there are people that like you. Bye: Go have fun.

[Terrence Chang]

Their are all acquaintance not friends. Some of them are really bad and the rest don't give me any chance. That the truth. They all keep me at arms length. You can check. I don't be on fb all the time you can see that

[Confuser]

I wouldn't check; I'm upset; you have family; your sister/or brother with new baby; I just want you to have a friend to go to the movies with/no girl/that's no you - that's India, I've been told/but this is something I will pray about and we must talk about later. Makes me very sad indeed. Kids can be so mean; oh my; If you have ONE good friend your WHOLE life; that friend is like a brother and you are so blessed! There is one!!! I will persist with this. Alright, got to sleep; ate too much ice cream; got up so early. I will not forget this. Please let us talk later.

[Terrence Chang]

It is just that experience thought me that wishful thinking will only bring despair. So I just keep myself alone

[Confuser]

Everybody....get hurt...but you must take a chance; if someone doesn't want to go with you; they are missing out....I don't like reading this; I am alone a lot; but that's not why: you are young: My goodness your brain will continue to grow until you are 26 years of age...so many things will change. We will talk more I hope....

[Deboshmita]

superb.... mast tha... last verse was superb... try to write something related to this topic again...

[Terrence Chang]

thank you soo soo much

[Deboshmita]

welcome........

[Emily]

I love your poem!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Emily