Fool's Game

Cross your heart
Thrust a dagger
See the truth
That covered your senses
You put an image
Your imagined hero
Shockingly he or she never arrives
When you are in need
Tear falls down as you pray
See your vision shatter
Close to nothing
The only thing that matters
Hate me or love me
I speak the logical truth
You are all blinded
The things that you spoon
Not knowing the truth
Of what you need
Judgmental as a matter of fact
You try to read a book
From behind to say I know the story
Who are you joking with
As a you only make a fool
 

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy your read

Reviews

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

I thought that poem was great.. Keep up the hard work Terrence.. I haven't read your work in a while and every time I do. I am really impressed.. Keep up the hard work my friend! :)

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Tess for your kind review

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

That's just me Terrence... You have an amazing sense for writing.. Just keep up the hard work.. :)

[ANTO]

You make some totally valid points here Terrence in an eloquent manner. Kudos my friend.
:))

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Anto

[Dhaye]

Not all blind are fools, but all fools are blind...in life's game.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Dhaye for your review

[Sami Khalil]

Ups and downs in any game even the fool,s one. A lot to consider and appreciate what you share with us. Excellent, sir... .:).....

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ...........

[Emily]

I love this one!
Keep it up!!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Emily

[wordman]

a great message terrance,i liked it !

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Wordman