She was Bullied

Don think I'm suicidal for posting this. It just came to me and I thought I might write it down.

She was beaten and bullied and stabbed in the back,
It was trust that she did lack. 

The words the names, they cut so deep,
They made her loose a good-night sleep.

The blade was so sharp.

The tons of scars on her hips,
The screams of frustration came out of her lips.

The screams are gone now,
She stopped them some how.

Look what you did.

Are you happy? Are you glad? 
Her story is quite sad.

She took that rope,
She lost all hope.

She is gone now. 

Don't you dare, 
Say you care.

Don't give your false sympathy. 

Reviews

[Dinali Sathma]

I literally closed my eyes in the line " she took that rope "... the poem is simple and in contemporary English which makes the whole thing bind to the present situations. Although I've never experienced or witness such hectic bullying in our country I feel a deep sympathy towards them.

[angelface13]

This was an extremely sad piece. I liked it though. It made me think about how what I say to people effects what happens to them. Thank you.

[Phillitup]

I would tend to agree with this. It also proves the harm of bullies now a days.

[Gregoire William Randel..]

I like this poetry, but I found a mistake. It should be "good-night sleep" instead of "good-nights sleep".
I hope you can keep up the good work.

Sincerely,
G. A.

[Aurora Dawn]

Thank you! I will change that right away :)

[Gregoire William Randell]

Awesome.

[ms. barrie]

i really love this (adds to favs.) - heart-wrenching, written with amazing rhythm and flow, a great write. thanks for reviewing "Maine" :)

[Aurora Dawn]

Oh, Thank you! And you're welcome :)

[ms. barrie]

you welcome :)

[Phillitup]

This poem is so sad but very well written.

[Aurora Dawn]

Thank you very much! :)

[DarrinReay]

I love this, the line 'she took that rope, she lost all hope' basically sums up how I felt once. I love it, well done! Keep up the work.
-DR.

[Aurora Dawn]

That feeling used to be very familiar to me, I'm glad you like it!

[Haley Lynn Thomas]

Such a tragic poem but very powerful. Have you been bullied? It seems you know what it feels like. It is a sad reality that bullies drive people to this.

[Aurora Dawn]

Actually yes, I have. But now I'm not which is great:) I am very much against bullying and abuse, things of that nature. Thankyoufor the review:3

[Haley Lynn Thomas]

agreed! i was bullied too! i'm glad things have improved for you.

[Aurora Dawn]

Yeah, I'm glad too :3

[Phillitup]

I feel the same way. I was bullied but now am not.