Veni, Vidi, Vici

Veni, Vidi, Vici.

I came, I saw, I conquered.

All my questions answered. 

I now know the truth,

The corruption of the youth.

Directing our eyes to the dead,

When we should be opening our ears to the living. 

Stop taking, and begin giving.

Life is just so short,

Try showing some support.

Stay kind, stay true.

Don't talk, Just do.

You could save a life,

You could stop someone from picking up that knife.

Veni, Vidi, Vici.

I came, I saw, I conquered. 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Alexander the great said it and you put it in a nice poetic form...:)

[Aurora Dawn]

That was my goal:) haha

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Roy]

Me gusta. (y)

[Writer *78*]

So much about the world and its cruel under goings of the present tense within 16 lines. I would say this writing is the work of a pure genius. Impressive work. Mind checking out my work?

-Writer *78*

[Aurora Dawn]

I'll be sure to check it out

[Phillitup]

Awesome! I like this one a lot!

[Aurora Dawn]

Thank you! :D

[Phillitup]

Your a great poet! I hope you realize your talent and keep following it.

[Aurora Dawn]

Thank you so much!

[Phillitup]

:)

[Phillitup]

So much eloquence...

[Aurora Dawn]

(: Thank you.