A prayer unto thee

I give you all of me and surrender my everything and love; I want nothing but your love in return. I present to you my troubles. I rest upon you my worries and my pain. My fears and my joys. I ask that you replace my doubts with thoughts of positive reinforcements of your undying love for me. I give you my devotion. I place before you, my soul. I ask that you see into me and fix what you see wrong. Please forgive me, my iniquities, and all the wrong I have wished upon others. Gift unto me unexpected actions from others and keep in my heart forgiveness of others and forgiveness for myself. Allow me to keep loving myself and keep my self-worth strong within myself. I pray that you continue to awake me every day with your precious mercy and undying love. Your generosity is wondrous, and when you touch my heart, it's the most incredible feeling in the Universe. Give me a new joy and grant me serenity for everyone I encounter. Forgive my debts and forgive this who are in debt to me. Allow me to be a blessing, for I do not expect to be blessed in return. Your love and grace are all I need to continue on this journey throughout this life. I come humbly unto you palms up, soul wide-open, heart filled with love, and the mind and body ready to be blessed and broken...

Reviews

[McBear]

The faith you have in this person really shows. I feel the feel(s) you have for them. Very beautiful and well written.

[TheMalady]

You have a deep understanding when it comes to your faith. I will not question you of that. As what I had previously stated, you're poem is deep and thought-provoking. Great job! :)

[samparks,sam]

so nice , beautiful poem at the time reading just feel you are going in fall of some one love

[Tiffany K Charles]

This is a prayer to the Creator of this Universe.... Not a poem about falling in love a man..... but thank you

[samparks,sam]

But nothing was seen by me God name in your prayer. Excuse me I write just new poem

[Tiffany K Charles]

I do not call the source that created us all God...... I say Universe because the word God is to small for the Source of Oneness

[samparks,sam]

oh I see that right