Flow

                          Flow

The water runs fast.

Rushing harder than sharp knives.

That cuts through my soul.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong use of words. I wanted to know more. Some pain and action leave us bleeding seeking new place and birth. Thank you Tiffany for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Short but says so much in such a short piece, that's what I like about short poems.
Its true water relates so much to emotion.
I myself out of the elements am water, as I am a very emotional person.
I like this poem.
keep on writing :)

[Tiffany K Charles]

Thanks for your reviews... this on is a haiku... Three lines 575.... That's why it's so short.... I have plenty more of poems that you can review or just read.... I'm constantly writing.....

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I will get onto those :)
I have a problem keeping my poems short I cant seem to do it.
So I think people that can write short meaningful pieces are quite cleaver.
Your very much welcome

[Dash the Reaper]

it is not often i see a well written haiku, keep it up

[LapseOfMind]

Wonderful haiku! I could never quite get those down but you achieved one quite nicely. Great job!