Alone for a Day in the Park

Oh Lord

 

     Does it matter where I sit at the park

     to receive your healing rays

     Does it matter how closely I listen

     to the ripples of the water flow in the pond

     Does it even matter if I choose to speak

      to anyone walking by during my quiet time

 

     Will you allow me to see you in the cloudless sky

     After I ask a question, am I to know it's You

      through the rustling of the trees

 

     Can I believe that it is You who is

      giving me the peace to be still to enjoy

      all the wonders created by You and for

        You

 

      You make me feel that life is worth living

       when I am in your garden

 

     And I never want to leave

     But I cannot live on beauty alone 

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This is absolutely beautiful...a prayer that asks some deep questions with complete imagery. I love the ending though. It's just a statement, but I translate it as a petition for a sign. Nice work!