Will I Still Tell?

Do tell

why I must tell the tale

As to How I became

Myself

What man or woman is privy

to my skivvy action

Save the ten or more

I settled the score sorely forthwith

Names change

to protect the image

Never did I play a game of scrimmage

with any less than I had to offer

I pitched

I scored

So much I bored myself

I gave the stars

before I saw the sun

I awakened senses

that resembled metal fences

Now what do you want me to tell

that cannot be seen in a blush

or sudden rush

to check their policies

on role playing

Those masters and servants

where slave is trade

And a phone call

And valid credit card away

I guess I gave testimony

Being baited

Before dated

Is that enough of me

before I score some more?

 

Reviews

[Leona Cieri]

Ahm, somehow I found this somewhat humourous in the way it was described. Not comical, but the way and the words you described and used added some lightness to it even though the beginning starts off about whether to tell how you became yourself which, would seem perhaps deep, but the end doesn't reflect that at all; although, some lines in the middle does. This may confuse you, but I can't pinpoint it quite either.
There were several lines I liked, for example, when you used sport's references as in, "Never did I play a game of scrimmage,"and "Now what do you want me to tell that cannot be seen in a blush."
Very nice work! ^^