Waiting

These walls kept me locked for a while

The path to exit was an infinite aisle

I found my own way out trough the pages of journal

I found my own way of how to be eternal

But I don't wanna be eternal, no more

I don't wanna forget what I'm waiting for

Someone should know that I'm real

Someone should know that I can feel

Someone should know that I don't see myself in me

Where is that someone who'll set me free

It looks like I'm waiting forever

Secretly, I know there'll never be that whoever

But fear is what's making me stay so long

So, I'll stay to write another song

Author's Note

English is not my first language so excuse any grammar issues.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

I think your simplicity throughout the poem is very good....Loved the concept my frnd....Very well thought out and well presented work....Full ratings!!!!

[Valentine]

You are doing fine writing in our language, just keep your writes coming. Valentine

[Louisa-Msiska]

This is really good. Sometimes when I write, its like am writing forever too.

[TTina]

Writing is both a good thing and not so much. I guess it depends on a day!

Thank you so much for your response! :)