Bottle Minds

Living mentally in a bottle.

I must shatter the walls or

life will stall. In this glass

lies my past. Presently I'll

build up waste & gas to get

the needed blast. Screw the

cork loose with ease.  For I 

can take the easy way out, 

straight up no cuts or gusts

to waste.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is good
we all live in glass some time in our life
we hide in glass some days
hoping no one willnotice us
but we are all goldfish in a bowl
on view for everyone to judge and see
it seems
good work

[ROXANE DORSEY]

glad you like the poem. thanks for the review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

straight out...the only way...if we let the past bottle us up and we just take baby steps...the lid will keep closing on us.
j.

[Les Chats Heureux]

Could the bottle be represented like the "circle of comfort" we tend to stay in ?