Here Comes A Storm

gnawing a bone two dogs

alone sitting pretty as pink.

classy a lady to be sitting 

so pretty as that yellow bumble bee.

flying to fly jet planes that spacious 

sky does a kite whimsy by.

tails of bows yellow as that rose risen 

to that smiling skyline.

as of looking up way high to that 

vicious dark sky brewing a storm.

dancing a play get out the way 

that looks like hale coming fast as day.

Jump in a dumpster from spontaneous

monsters shape like balls.

Lil' rocks hit like bricks in a lickety

split.

Run like the wind honker down in an 

inn.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Nice riffing with some old-timey vocabulary thrown in. Second to last line, I would spell that: "lickety split" but I understand if you don't want to change it. You play with interesting imagery in an original way . . . Fondly, Margie

[emmajoy]

Between each phrase is a magical bars of music, different keys, different speed! Love the way you dance your words back to front at times, twist meanings, waltz from one scene to another.. creating a wondrous cacophony, complete with cymbals!

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks for much for the kind review.