Where Was I

My best friend passed two years ago by a drunk driver. I was supposed to be at her house, but i had summer school. this is about how i feel and how, at the last minute, she felt. it's extremely short......

Where was I when the sun rose?
Where was I? Nobody knows.
Where was I when the sun died?
I was waiting on the other side.

Author's Note

sorry...like i said, extremley short.

Reviews

[Through the Gateway]

Powerful in its simplicity and brevity.

[Love Struck]

Ohh, this is so sad! I like how you related your friend to the sun, when you wrote about how it rose and died...life always gets better though, no matter what happens to you. Good job, thumbs up!

[Avery James]

Just because the poem is short doesn't mean it's not good. Your poem has a good impact and I can really see the emotions and meaning behind just the 4 lines. Good job!

[chiisu]

aww that is so sad...i am sorry for your loss...i would not live with out my best friend...short sweet to the point

[anthony lopez]

short sweet and to the point. i love it!

[THE LOST ROSE]

Short doesn't stop this piece from being powerful. Words expressing how we feel has no limits or requirements. Handling it the way you do in a poem is a wonderful tribute to her and what a friend she had in you. Great job.

[jex]

it's a bit short...but it still is thought-provoking. good work. I like it.

[J.Black]

short, but perfect.
x

[MakinItRainRed]

This is one hell of a poem. I like it. A lot. Great work.

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and to the point. Nice write.