Why?

How could you do this,

Of all things said to do?

I had faith in you.

That stupid new girl,

Who goes out with you know who.

Shove her into the ground.

I hate you for this,

You.....ugh!

We had been friends for years, so i don't understand,

Why you take her side, instead of mine.

Reviews

[the_ese]

curious.

[J.Black]

SO good!
lots and lots and lots of emotion in this piece right here! I so felt it. Nicely done!

[Erin Was Here.]

I love this! You portrayed so much emotion in your words. Awesome poem.

[Toumei]

the anguish of betrayal in its most honest and personal form More please. :3

[Nik Dendera]

I do love a bit of anger! Nothing like venting, ranting and generally wishing evils on people.

Nicely done! A short burst of violence is always good for the page! Really vivid anger, betrayal. :)

[THE LOST ROSE]

Sometimes you want to kick some $#%. But this is a better way to handle the situation. When you feel like punching him next time you see him write again and again and again.

[O!]

I hope this write helped you blow off some steam a bit. It's hard to really know if the person ure trusting is trustworthy....and unfortunately...we all find out the hard way.

Whats the point in staying angry? Ignore what isnt worth knowing.

x,
O!

[christy]

LUV IT!!!! HOttNESS

[~angelalala~]

i like the way this poem was written. almost like having a conversation with someone. shows the frustration, anger very well, the reader can feel it & almost hear this conversation taking place. everyone has had those moments of betrayal by someone you trust. nicely done.

[MakinItRainRed]

Nice poem. It was to the point. I like your style. The hate for this person is clearly visible.