Vampires...

i just wish it. plus, i got boreded.

I wish I was a vampire,

I wish i was a night-dweller.

I wish i was a countess,

I could even go out less.

I want to be a blood drinker,

Not somthing with someone should tinker.

I wanna be a vampire,

Can a vampire expire?

Author's Note

i suck at poems, lol.

Reviews

[Bella Rave]

its not bad?

[Ian]

I like vampires.
Well, this is not bad.
It's actually good. I liked it a lot...

"Can a vampire expire?"

That simple line, expresses so much... emotions, desires and it gives the whole meaning to the poem.
Althought this is a short poem its full of emotions, feelings, and it has a great meaning and a philosophy...
the philosophy of the death...

"Can a vampire expire?"
Great ending!
Good job!

[Madara Uchiha]

it wasnt bad, i agree i would love to be a vampire two.

[Cคɾเ&#..]

*sigh* I love Vampires. NICE POEM> I don't think you suck, your really good. well I have also written poems on vampires, twilight vampires in particular. So I'll give you like all 100 points for this! GREAT JOB!

[Strife]

You're talking about real vampires, right? Not faeries...vampires. Vampires...

[closed]

it's alright...not bad on expressing what you want. :)