Death

Written for all my wonderful "friends"... or so called...

 

Death

Don’t turn back. Keep walking

East. I’ll stay west.

As I slowly bleed on my own account,

To meet my end, as my

Heart beats slower until it stops and you leave.

Reviews

[Catastrophe]

Wow...that was smooth...yet really deep.
I like how you put that all the words together...
I can relate to that feeling...good write!

[Shugotenshi1692]

Nice choice of words. Sorry about your pain, but it makes us stronger if we choose that. I AM NOT MOVING! I AM HERE FOR YOU!

[*Petitti*]

I like how you worded this poem....it's really good....keep writing....

[Madara Uchiha]

Im sorry that you also feel this pain life aint fair, but good wirte.

[Bella22]

I am sorry that you are hurting. We are not going anywhere!

[anthony lopez]

i am so sorry Jane for all the pain you are goin through.