You

 

You

I cried,

And you came.

I sought,

And there you stood.

I was hiding,

And you found me.

I was frightened,

And you were there, making me brave.

I was sad,

And you made me happy.

For these things,

I thank thee.

 

Reviews

[Shugotenshi1692]

lots of emotion. i love it when people show emotion in their work. i believe poetry is not poetry unless it shows it. you did a very good job.

[♡Moon Child♡..]

Awww...that is a very sweet poem! I highly enjoyed it! It was simple, yet very elegant. :)
Happy Writing!

[Sandy sunday]

Awesome

[just is]

So simple and yet to the point
well stated.

[TheOne]

So simple, so exellent.

[Flame DM]

very nice, the person you wrote this for must be very flattered =]

[angelina blue]

very nice.............how nice to have a person like this..............

[J.Black]

This is really well said. Well done. "I was frightened,
And you were there, making me brave."