L-O-V-E poem

This is true!

 

Lo and behold,

Of all things that could have happened. Your sweet

Voice

Echoed through my head.

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

I know this moment it happens alot when I'm trying to focus at
school work but my brain refuses and then...BOMB a previous
conversation with my guy plays back to me in slow motion
and I'm to into it to stop and even try to pay attention.

This is adorable if it's for your boyfriend he better appreciate!
cause the voices never go away! Nice piece

[Beatrice Boyle (Grandm..]

Hello Tai-San...you will ALWAYS remember your first love...the sweetest time of your life. Enjoy it while you can.

Grandma Bea

[Bella22]

Short and sweet! It is nice how you showed so many wonderful feelings with just a few words!

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship P..]

O.O did you write this for ...err... me? just woundering... No one has ever wrote a poem for me. Thank you, Princess, I love you, Janeene, I always will!

Love, Shawn

[Soapbox]

Simple words that speak volumes. I love it.

I think that you will definitely like this site: http://finallyseeing.tumblr.com/
I found it while blog hunting for inspiration.

- Soapbox

[poetic soul]

echoed thru my head?
wouldnt it have been better if you'd written, "echoed thru my heart"??
jus a fleeting suggestion... its yo poem and you ll know better... :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul