The Star Struck Lovers

This is for the one I love. To you Lina Grey

A horrified human huddle

Melting like butter at the beauty of

A hot hubris houri

Trying to win her over

 5  A handful of halvah and hazelnuts 

The hues on the hillock made him handsome

Her hardy harlequin smile

Made him hotheaded and haywire

Horrifying hoodoo making a huff

10    Ready to commit hara-kiri at a hamlet in his habiliment 

A genuine homage a halfhearted highwayman would take

His hamstrings going taut waiting for her answer

Author's Note

This was created for the one I love. Before she knew I had feelings for her this was my only hint as to who I liked. Can you find what I hid in every stanza? This poem was inspired by the elegant honeysuckle and Lina Grey

Reviews

[Marie]

This is a lovely poem, but I couldn't find what was hiding either.

[Lina Grey]

Goodness, I'm going to need a bigger vocabulary. I had to look up half of the words that start with the letter h. Anyway, this reminds me of that alliteration poem we had to write for english last year. It's beautiful and sweet...like honeysuckle :) Except i refuse to believe that I am 'hubris', according to the definition on dictionary.com...

[The Turk]

I had to find a word that would make the alliteration go on but I felt that you had a lot of pride. Did you ever find what I was hiding in every stanza?

[Lina Grey]

words that start with h? :P I don't know sorry love