How can you notice?

Sometimes even the most obvious things may pass you by.

She’s got the world in her eyes

Her whole life on her shoulder

Her life is perfect on the outside

Inside there are bruises

Inside there’s a broken heart

She’s laughing to mask the pain

But do you notice her?

Do you look her way?

Of course you do!

When she’s dead on the floor.

Reviews

[Andrew Scorah]

A great poem that hits you between the eyes with that twist at the end.

[Distant horizons]

we're all guilty of looking away at times.. powerful words, flows well.

[Angelic Surrender]

Morbid, but great poem, i liked it