Cue the Sun

Cinquain

Drag me

into sunlight

where neon lemon love

crumbles paper hearts into ash,

then dust

Reviews

[angelina neves]

Uau! Beautiful!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Nice

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Remarkable word choice to provide readers with vivid imagery! Great job, Tammy.

Sal

[DeeWV]

Fine write Tammy. The Cinquain is one of my favorite forms. It is especially helpful
when my muse has gone on "vacation". I can always manage a cinquain and that
often sparks another poem. This one is subperb.

Dee

[Mohl083]

very nice, especially the neon lemon love line there in the middle. i also like the ending, almost like a vampire
repenting on a life times full of sin giving himself up to the God he has shunned for centuries.