Climax

A Poem by Tammy

Noise makers make noise

climaxing at midnight's breath

lipstick and champagne

© 2009 Tammy

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poetic soul

uhh!! classy this was!! :)

regards,
poetic soul

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Salvatore Buttaci

I like the way you used the two metaphors of lipstick and champagne for love and celebration!

Sal

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Scanners See Sound

Champaign? I thought it was champagne. Well, whatever.

As far as haiku go, I suppose this is fairly decent. It got the point across, and I suppose you can find deeper meaning if you interpret things a bit more symbolically; presuming any deeper meaning is intentional.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on January 3, 2009
Last Updated on January 4, 2009

Author

Tammy

Beckley, WV

About

Born and raised in Southern West Virginia. I'm a frequent contributor to several online and print poetry magazines. I love writing poetry. Painting pictures with words that tickle the imagination. I.. more..