Forgivness

Forgive and Forget

Hes hurting inside

Slowly hes dying

Hes breaking down

Hes crying

Please

He loves you

and You always say you love him too

what happened then

Where is that love now

He feels so alone

Cant you see

You hurting him

With you is all he wants to be

Please

of pretty

Please

Just

for

him

Please

Just

Forgive!

 

 

Reviews

[RedInk524]

As serious as the poem is, i actually kinda laughed because it USED to describe me and my ex the first couple times she left me for her stupid reasons. But then i just got over it and realized how much of a b***h she was and how happy i am without her. lol. And now i am ashamed of how strongly i tried to hold on to her... Ah well, life is a b***h.
Even though im sure this poem is meant to be serious, i cant help but see it as a sarcastic mockery of how some guys (myself included unfortunately) can be so god damn desperate to hold on to someone regardless of how hard they are thrown down. Good write, i enjoyed it. Just not the memories it sparked... lol

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

With a name like serenity, I should as well hope you can forgive :)

[ShappireRose]

pretty sister