My life

A poem I wrote while I am in a bad place...

 

Falling

Again and again

In the face of death

 

Cold metal

Helpful metal

Evil metal

 

Black paints my heart

My mind swirling in the abyss of insanity

Never coming back

 

My will crumbles

In the face of truth

In the face of life

 

The hard truth

A hard life

 

Stinging pain

Dripping red

Numbing me

 

Take me away

Give me my freedom

Give me my life

 

Death comes

Welcome me

With cold arms

 

Drifting away

Loosing myself

Forgetting all

 

Death

Pain

Numb

 

My life

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mary Fioratti]

So many times we go deep down in a dark hole. And then we think that we will never come to the surface. But bad times, just teach us something...is awful, isn't it? But perhaps later you see that this dark time brought you something new...that you learned through the pain. And believe me, you will see the sun again... :-D
(((((Hugs)))))
*Mary*

[Wolfwind]

Darkness begets darkness
Sorrow begets sorrow
Only light begets things bright
Take it, live it, or lose it
Only you can choose it

:)
Aaron

[Pi Cee]

This is just....sad.

[emma]

ended with a bang, and a dramatic one too! i loved it! you were really descriptive and i really felt what you were talking about. great work:)!

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

that is a sad life to live in and sadly i can relate... i love the poem, it has so much emotion and passion but also it tells a story of a life in such a short way... great write