Fake family

 

Screaming

Crying

Hiding

 

Saftey of the home

No more

No where

 

A sick excuse of a family

No love no warmth

 

Fake smiles

Fake laughs

Fake family

 

Held on by a thread

So close to breaking point

So close to falling of a cliff

 

Where were the happy times?

There wernt any

Ever

 

In the world we are happy

At home we are angry

In my heart I am broken

 

Growing up

To fast

To quick

 

No childhood memories

No happy family

All fake

 

We scream

We cry

This is my fake family

Author's Note

Please comment!!

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

stolen chilhood... yes I can relate... very sad indeed. U express the pain very well!

[Rose of Gondor]

So sad....

[Sophie]

I love this! you express your emotion so well, it's beautiful! Just a few grammar issues "to fast/ to quick" should be "too." and "wernt" is weren't. Just letting you know :P but i really liked this!

[Alana McGuire]

I can really relate to this piece very well. It really hurts a lot when you can't feel at home in your own house with your own family. It's not fun growing up fast and having a lack of trust and thinking that nothing ever lasts.
You did a wonderful job of exressing how you feel in this. I can feel your pain through it.
I wrote something similar about a week ago about my family and childhood. It's called Stress of Both Worlds. It would be really awesome if you would read and review it, please. :)

[olla]

again.. well done..

[Chrissy]

Excellent

[Charile]

Wow love it

[Kenneth The Poet]

Crazy good.