Console the fear

heart break

If those things were right where it used to be,
i dont need this anger and those unseen love to see,
coz what you make of me at the end,
are pieces of shattered glassed that i had mend.
I may have given myself to this alien world,
and ferry to another heart coz what you lost have been sold.
Heartless cries are hard to hear,
and when death steps near,
love can still wait and consold the fear

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very touching and sad indeed, very emotional to and heartfelt, not to mention heart breaking since it is about heartbreak.
I like the rhymes you have to.
This was a nice poetic way to describe heartbreak.
Great write :)

[Tandin]

thank you review more of my poem..and thank you for your time..appreciated

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! Heart-Touching and Sad.. Love it! So true!!!